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In the garden of Don. He had such an array of interesting things...

For more on Don, check out my blog [link]

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© 2009 Samantha Nandez, All Rights Reserved

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The tones and textures really stand out on this photograph. I say excellent job on that! When I was looking at the people in the cage I thought "What? Jesus in a cage?". Thoughts of Howard Finster start running through my head and I realize It is not Jesus. It does look like some sort of Biblical scene though. Adds a touch of controversy and gets people stirred up ;) .
I like the focal point off center. It adds interest to the eye. I am undecided about the close "cropping" of the scene or image. I want more space around the cage. Ah! Unless you are reinforcing the "caged" feeling by giving the image a close, almost claustrophobic border. Then that is a good idea and I would carry on with it.
Well done and I look forward to more!
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:iconsargeras:
this is pretty strange. i like the idea though. maybe a closer up shot where the entire cage isn't in frame would be more interesting compositionally.
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hahaha thats very strange but very interesting as a picture. =]

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thanks :D

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"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who only dream by night." - Edgar Allan Poe
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yeah I was thinking the same thing...but I couldn't crop in more in PS because it's not focused well in the first place.

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"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who only dream by night." - Edgar Allan Poe
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Welcome! Read your blog btw to and very interesting! :)

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Jesus Loves :love: you so much!

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Have you read about the "Ticking Time Bomb" ? [link]
:iconsargeras:
ah well, i guess that works then
:iconblackcarrionrose:
ja

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"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who only dream by night." - Edgar Allan Poe
:iconblackcarrionrose:
thanks :D

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"Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who only dream by night." - Edgar Allan Poe
:iconstrengthinweakness:
welcome! :D

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Jesus Loves :love: you so much!

I love :love: Jesus yes I do I love :love: Jesus how about you?


Have you read about the "Ticking Time Bomb" ? [link]

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May 18, 2009, 1:08:55 PM

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