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First of all I was going to mention moving the subject or focal point higher or lower to give this more dynamics. Then the more I look at it the more I think it is good where it is. The horizon line is great where it lies. The clouds look perfect with their color and tone. The extra dynamic I think I was looking for is in the point of view you used. I like the closeness of the grass and clover(?) giving us a "rabbit's eye view". I would like to see the foliage be in focus and the building slightly out. I think it would be very interesting.
Your photography looks polished and professional. Keep up the good work!
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I truly love this amazing image. The colors and vibrant calm feeling of this image is very pleasing to the eye, and pulls me into the scene. The sense of angle really elevates the viewer to become part of this scene as if they are right there looking at this. The capture, target is wonderful, making me see possibly something that would normally be missed, like a hidden part of the past that is hidden within nature; a place once where people thrived, lived, and had a life beyond what is happening now. The strong yet soft clouds enhance the contrasting elements of this image and empowers it into a feel of a once in a lifetime capture. Very well shot, and composed.
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Outstanding shot.

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Thank you, I'm glad I submit this version and not the aged one. I think this one is a lot stronger :D

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Very Nice , I love this one ..the colors are great ..
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Wonderful shot and green colors. Reminds me of something out of LOST lol

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Haha yeah I didn't even think of that :giggle:

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thank you :D

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haha it just dawned on me.
I am a big LOST fan lol

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
1/500 second
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May 18, 2009, 4:34:51 PM

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